IELTS寫作 Task 1範例：6分

Criteria

Score

Comments

Task Achievement
(for Task 1)

6.5

Very good paraphrasing and overview with appropriately selected information at the beginning of the essay.

Key features and bullet points are adequately presented. Other than the developments, the eastern area of the island, which remains unchanged, should also be mentioned to gain higher marks under TASK.

You should also mention the fact the two areas of accommodation are located on either side of the reception area.

You used SURROUNDED in your essay, but it is not quite the case. Be clear and be precise.

Coherence & Cohesion

5.5

Information is listed somewhat robotically.

In order to gain more marks under this category, group your information better by mentioning that the accommodation + restaurant are placed in close proximity while leisure facilities are spread out.

Avoid making a list of A, B, C, and D without enough linking. You need a clear PROGRESSION.

Lexical Resource

6

You use an adequate range of vocabulary with no spelling mistakes for this task.

More attention needs to go to less common vocabulary with an awareness of style and natural collocation to gain more marks.

There is some repetition: visitors, accommodation. Inaccurate choice of vocabulary also occurred: ENTERTAINMENT.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

6

If it’s the first time you’ve mentioned the topic, use the INDEFINITE ARTICLE to introduce it.

You use a mix of simple and complex sentence structures. You need fewer grammatical mistakes to gain higher marks.

Having said that, none of your mistakes reduce communication. So keep up the good work!

Total Score for Task 1

6.0