IELTS寫作Task 2範例：6分

Criteria

Score

Comments

Task Response
(for Task 2)

6

You address all parts of the task adequately by discussing both the pros and cons of the topic.

However, you did not offer a solution how to strike a balance.  At the end of your introduction, you focus on the drawbacks. That makes your readers think you are going to develop your argument based on that. Later, you talk about the convenience followed by the negative impact without really drawing a meaningful conclusion.

Coherence & Cohesion

6

There is a clear overall progression in your essay.

Your ideas and examples are linked effectively. The end of your 3^rd paragraph should be clearer. It should link to a concluding sentence about trusting people.

A clear concluding sentence for each main body paragraph will earn you 7 or above under this category.

Lexical Resource

6

Adequate vocabulary. Avoid using vague adjectives like GOOD/BAD in academic writing if you do not elaborate on this.

Overall good collocations, but you need all your words and phrases to work better together. Read more in English in order to produce natural collocations.

Do not form words and ideas in Chinese first before you try and translate them into English.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

6

Adequate use of a mix of simple as well as more complex sentence structures.

You need to be careful with your verb tenses and your singular/plural forms and the verbs that agree with the forms. None of your grammatical errors affect the meaning you try to convey.

Keep up the good work and reduce such mistakes to gain a higher score.

Total Score for Task 2

6